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     It seemed simple, cruising the cyber highways seeking adventure.  Eric and I left reality at three fifty-five p.m. via instant messenger (MSN messenger naturally; Yahell, as we’ve dubbed it, and its ilk are evaded and shunned by the cyber elite), intending a quick yet needed ‘net fix.  Walking in the cyber cities, meeting up with friends and acquaintances, even a few enemies, reality called yet we didn’t want the adventure ending as quickly as that.  We stayed awhile, seeking a real escapade.
     We met up with this man named Jeremy, a tall, skinny individual.  He assured us that suffering the internet’s addictiveness was typical, that teens seek escapist tactics every day and plugging in was the simplest and easiest way. After all, turning the pages in a paperback was extra exertion in a mind weakened and battered in the daily hustle and bustle, thus even paper’s smell isn’t incentive in reading and turning pages.  Much easier using the superhighway, reading via searches and finding manuscripts at a click; yet Jeremy warned us the internet eventually liquefies minds, thus curbing the need will benefit us in the future.
     Yet is seems a bit weird, telling us this via MSN messenger. Jeremy was liquefying his mind as we talked, disintegrating with his message.  I realized this and ended the talk, disappearing from Jeremy’s view in the messenger’s chat list.  Eric stayed, stayed and talked with Jeremy, I was unsuccessful in my attempts at extracting him away.  I felt like I was running in a circle, suffering the inability and inadequacy the circumstances put me in.
     I left the internet at seven sixteen p.m.  Last I saw, Eric was still plugged in.
©2005-2009 ~anaria
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This was an assignment for my CRW3110 class this semester. (spring 2005) Basically, it was to place a constraint on our writing and see how far we could go with it. We had to choose one of the main vowels (a, e, i, o) and not use it at all. (a la Perec's A Void, which doesn't have the letter "e" - yes, this is an assignment based off of the Oulipo.)

I originally started this thinking I would only try to use the letters "e" and "i," but found it too difficult when it came to sitting down and writing it. (worked in my head in the shower, go figure ;)) So it ended up not having the letter "o."

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:iconyoseimurasaki:
Reminds me of how I felt when I started to get into the net on around 1996. I haven't been disconnected since...
:icondancore:
i like this i identify myselt with u on this one...

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There are no roses without thorns... [link]
:iconanaria:
*laughs* Yeah, I think I've spent more time online these days than off....insane.
:iconanaria:
*laughs* I had to use either MSN, ICQ (which really isn't used by youngens) or IRC for the constraint...I was able to dub the one "Yahell" though so people understood why I wasn't on that one. *laughs*

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it babe!
:icondancore:
I likre that name Yahell LOL.

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There are no roses without thorns... [link]
:iconanaria:
*laughs* It actually wasn't one of my creation; my friend dubs it that. :)

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